Može li mi,molim vas,netko ispraviti i ocjeniti ovaj esej onako kako bi bilo na maturi? Vidim neke glupe greške (y nisam u i pretvorio itd), ali sam ostavio sve da ne lažem sam sebi..
Unaprijed hvala!
Some people say that tourism is beneficial to a country. Others say that it does
more harm than good.
Every country has something unique . Something that other people want to see, explore or, if it is a food, taste. With that something it attracts other people ,from different states, to visit it.
Tourism can be really good thing. With it, state can promote it's natural beautyes and others can enjoy it. There is also money factor, which is good for a country. People often go to vocation in someplace they have not been ,and create beautiful memories . Countrys can make connections through it.
On the other hand, it can be bad. For example, at summer a lot of people are going to the sea and highways are, in most cases, crowded. Trips are long and people get angry. Prices are often high and people can not afford themselves some luxery. Nightclubs are being opened, and work to early morning hours ,so local people can not sleep because of it. Country gets bad reputation ,with it less tourist, moreover less money and even loss some connections with other states.
In conclusion my opinion is that tourism could be beneficial to a country if it is leaded properly. So, if some rules are set ,if traffic is controlled, prices are medium and guest is treated good it can only be a good thing.
Anketa
