A lot of young people are choosing to live at home while studying at university

[bubiZG]

Raspnite me, al' meni ovo nikako ne ide...samo se nadam da ću s ovakvim esejom dobit 2 na maturi. Bio bi vam zahvalan na mišljenju, kritikama, ali i volio bi čut imam li šanse za prolaz?

puno hvala!

A lot of young people are choosing to live at home while studying at university

I have chosen this topic to write about because year after year there's more students who don't want to leave their homes. Some student like to leave home and go to live in other country or city but in the last time there is more students who don't like that.

At the begin here is some good arguments for live at home while studying at university. Students who live at home always have good, tasty and fresh food which is a big thing when you came hungry from classes. Also, they can study in their private space without disturbing and noise which other students make. That kind of students also can rely on their parents in any trouble. At the end of this paragraph is important to tell that there's no special hose rule for going on partyes at weekend and usually students can stay on party as much as they want.

On the other hand students who went to another town or state have a great responsibility for themselves and getting a big life expirience. They don't have a problems with leaving home after university, and they're actually more prepared for life. Also students who live in interaction with other student in generation always are more friendly and have more sense for others.

To conclude with, I think that university preparing us for real life and there'll be great that all students can go to university in other towns and countries. That would be good for social interaction between young people and that would prepare everyone for everything that life serve in front of us.

[Anastasia]

Nemam sad vremena za ispravljanje cijelog eseja, ali evo par savjeta.

Ono što ne smiješ nikako zaboraviti -> U-VLA-ČE-NJA! To nemoj niti slučajno zaboraviti na eseju.
Nadalje, primijetila sam da falivaš najobičnije glagolske oblike i nastavke, tipa pišeš ''there is students'' :O !! Nemoj na takvim glupostima gubiti bodove, to sigurno znaš!
I, nemoj pisati skraćene oblike, nikad! Čak i can't radije piši kao cannot.
Prouči ove linking words (proguglaj)...Jer, npr. izraz 'at the begin' ne postoji. Pravi izraz bi bio npr. 'To start with'. A 'to conclude' nema with u izrazu.
Nadalje, iza njih idu ZAREZI.

Ima još dosta grešaka u leksičkom odabiru i stavljanju 'a' i 'the', ali mislim da je bolje da se usmjeriš na ovo gore što sam navela i na tome proradiš jer ako to sve izvježbaš, lijepo ćeš dobiti dosta bodova na tome, umjesto da ih izgubiš.

[bubiZG]

eh, hvala ti puno

ma borim se sa engleskim i još budala stavim A razinu (a ni jedan faks mi ne traži engleski)

[Anastasia]

Ma stigneš to do ponedjeljka izvježbati. samo nemoj dopustiti da te trema i/ili strah pojedu.
Pročitaj neke eseje na forumu (ima dobrih primjera), vidi gdje bi ti pogriješio i tako.

A na nižoj se treba napisati nekakvo pismo od 60 riječi.xD blesavo.