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Brielle

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Some teenagers like to be trendy
« Svibanj 27, 2012, 14:37:43 »
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Some teenagers like to be trendy and will buy/ listen to / eat what is popular at the moment. Others like to be different from other people,as well as being part of a group such as Goths and Freaks.
                               

These days we are becoming witnesses of a massive trend changing process, which is connected with the progress of technology. While some people create their own opinion and attitude against these new trends, others follow them without any criticism. So, in this essay I am going to analyse both sides of different social groups.
                             
 As we all know, teenagers are a group of people which is more likely to be under the influence of media. They like to buy new things on the market because that represents a sign which brings them popularity. Not only the popularity, the new gadgets will make their life much easier. They don’t need to worry about anything, because with the all new trendy stuff, teenagers know they possess a thing with the best qualities.
                             
On the other hand, being a member of a group, shows that they are able to find something that describes their own qualities in a best way. For instance they don’t need to accommodate and change their lifestyle with every new trend on the market; furthermore they create their own individualistic personality. Teenagers with similar characteristics have the benefit representing themselves to the world in a unique way.
                             
To sum up I believe that people who belong to a group are less under pear pressure than others; they grow their own personal view on the world. Personally I respect more those people, because they are not afraid to show their real opinion, and they don’t follow new trends mindlessly, like sheep.
Imagine all the people living life in peace. You may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one. I hope someday you'll join us, and the world will be as one.
John Lennon

Elisabeth

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Some teenagers like to be trendy
« Svibanj 27, 2012, 16:08:52 »
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Some teenagers like to be trendy and will buy/ listen to / eat what is popular at the moment. Others like to be different from other people,as well as being part of a group such as Goths and Freaks.
                               

These days we are becoming witnesses of a massive trend changing process, which is connected with the progress of technology. While some people create their own opinion and attitude against these new trends, others follow them without any criticism. So, in this essay I am going to analyse both sides of different social groups. podrazumijeva se da ces o tom pisati, ne moras to naglasavat u uvodu.
                             
 As we all know ne ide mi uz esej bolji kreni to start with..., teenagers are a group of people which is more likely to be under the influence of media. They like to buy new things on the market because that represents a sign which brings them popularity. Not only the popularity, the new gadgets will make their life much easier. They don’t need to worry about anything, because with the all new trendy stuff, teenagers know they possess a thing with the best qualities.
                             
On the other hand, being a member of a group, shows that they are able to find something that describes their own qualities in a best way. For instance they don’t need to accommodate and change their lifestyle with every new trend on the market; furthermore they create their own individualistic personality. Teenagers with similar characteristics have the benefit representing themselves to the world in a unique way.
                             
To sum up I believe that people who belong to a group are less under pear pressure than others; they grow their own personal view on the world. Personally I respect more those people, because they are not afraid to show their real opinion, and they don’t follow new trends mindlessly, like sheep.


Uvod - ok, izbaci onaj prekrizeni dio.

Ne znam jel mi se cini ili ne, ali ti si u odlomku za i protiv pisala sve za :-\ uopce ne mogu raspoznati sto je za a sto protiv. Jer sve se vrti na istu stvar. Sretni su kad nesto kupe a sretni su i kad nista ne kupe.  :-\  mislim da si trebala naglasiti vise kako se ponasa jedna odredjena skupina tinejdzera a kako druga. Malo je zbrkano to sve. Trebala si u drugom odlomku napisati koja grupa goth i sl...

Zakljucak dobar, vokabular dobar, vezna sredstva ok.
Eto samo to sto je meni osobno nejasno.

U globalu esej je za 4 do 5.
Živim u svojim svijetovima. Želim se izmaknuti svima. Želim biti neprimjetna jer ih ne primjećujem.

Brielle

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Odg: Some teenagers like to be trendy
« Svibanj 27, 2012, 20:31:01 »
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Elisabeth, hvala ti puno !  :-*
Imagine all the people living life in peace. You may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one. I hope someday you'll join us, and the world will be as one.
John Lennon